I Became An Immortal On Mortal Realm

I'm already a fan of this author since his last novel (top tier Providence) and was expecting something similar to it, but I was surprised the author has taken another approach which was good fang Wang wasn't a second han jue he is op but in a different way he doesn't stay low key but at the same time he doesn't go around causing trouble and courting death, there are no stupid young masters , the fights are amazing and sometimes you can see the author painting a picture for you Pros : -There is no clear romantic partner right now but the two potential partners are not just dead weight or a burden they take care of themselves and one of them even was the one who helped the mc the most not the opposite -another aspect that I haven't seen in a novel before and wish to see more of it is growing family members with you , they are not just some relatives who would only appear at the start of the novel and disappear after or get killed for character development, they have Thier path , growth and story -mist of the characters are unique and likable Cons There is a translation inconsistency but it's bearable also the techniques names are too long

i don't like the novel much i meant it decent but it just that not bad but not good this just another novel about op mc very like face slap other people with the ultimate talent ( aka cheat ) and the world built just normal cultivation stuff with realm about realm ( the cultivation level kinda new but not thing too special much ) still this is a ok novel for the one new to the cultivation but with me nah i got others better to read last read : 50

A very good novel so far, in general, a quite interesting story although the background is like the typical cultivation worlds with a very decent MC although for my taste too lazy towards some things and lack of ferocity at times.

It's good I mean the mc is op while also not being op He is stronger than most but his friend is mysterious person with immortal history and helps mc

Really good novel, among the best cultivation novels in the same genre. Translation isn't that bad but spells and techniques have really long and annoying names. Everything else is fine especially pace (not too slow, not too fast). I think this might turn into masterpiece like the other work of the author. Strongly recommend

I didn't like it, but it's a fun novel. Why I don't like this novel? Mc motivation is shallow: he is helping the feng family but why? We never see his mother and the only times we see his father, he is either astonished about the mc or talking about him. mc definitely doesn't love his family that much, I don't see why should I care about the family. Mc has emotional range of a brick: first time killing? who cares, flying for the first time? so what, living 200 years in seclusion without rest and talking to other people? doesn't matter let me see the sun for 30 minutes and I'm good to go. Mc is a Gary stu: the world revolve around him. If he has the spell A, the logic bend backward so he can be the best with that spell, he enters the fight with someone 11 realm higher than him without plan or escape route or any form of preparation and then kills him and escapes just to "test himself". My score is 3. 5 But I can see why some people might like it. This novel has everything to be a good popcorn read. Face slapping, shucking everyone in the crowd, genius mc and etc. That's why I'm giving it a four star.

Overall, this novel tells a compelling story but struggles with translation quality. The translation is generally decent, but there are two main issues: name consistency and the translation of cultivation spells into English. Firstly, there’s a lack of consistency with names, particularly with the term "mountain vein. " Sometimes it’s translated as "channel" or "meridian, " which makes it confusing. It feels like different translators or proofreaders used different words for the same concept. It would be much clearer if one term was used consistently throughout the novel. Secondly, the translation of cultivation spells is problematic. These spells are written in romanized Mandarin, making it hard to grasp their meaning.