Earth's Alpha Prime

Already after the first few chapters it is clear that this is the author's first online novel. That's why I don't approach it too critically, as we all know, you have to start somewhere. The positive features of the novel: the story looks quite good, with the possibility of development for the better. Some chapters are being re-edited to obtain better text quality. The action taking place in the trial world resembles the opening of a new server in some "RPG" game. Every now and then there are new monsters, locations, achievements, new items, etc. . Thanks to this, the author obtains a picture of an ideal world in the "litRPG" scheme. Now we come to some of the negative things in the novel. Character development is extremely fast, which even the author of the novel notices. Completely unnecessary change in Mcu's weight (raising to 700 kg). With complete disregard for the rules of physics (apart from the destroyed couch). Artificial intelligence with "god mode" installed, it's surprising that they don't start by building a base on the moon. Adding the quantum prefix to AI (another unnecessary one), the author had to follow the example of films from the 1980s and 1990s, where, in order to avoid explaining the hardware, they only said that it was quantum and that's all.

I don't know why people are hating on this novel I personaly feel that it is well executed and good story true the OPnes of mc is a bit high but autor can still give us satysfying fights and curious new abilities all the time plus it seems to me like the only problem is the lack of more chapters I personaly like it it's a simple and satysfying power-fantasy I mean it was stated in like the first few chapters that mc is op and not potential op but pure op

It's an excellent novel. It clearly has the overall quality of the top 30. The main problem is the number of chapters and the times before new chapters are WAY too long. To summarize the novel, it's a litRPG. It does not revolutionize the genre but follows the codes and creates an interesting and exciting universe. The mc's innate talent (cheat/golden finger) is op af but since a lot of the secondary characters' skills are too, it's not too overwhelming. It's a fairly short read that I recommend to anyone who likes the litRPG genre.

Chapter 72: couldn't make it to at least 100 before dropping Grammar's kinda iffy -Author was tryna make an OP character. . . He went crazy with the OP but did fuck all for the character. A new power-up/ability is revealed at most every two chapters -All characters exist to get killed by the MC or pledge absolute braindead allegiance to him -The world building has potential but so far iss all over the place as far as the technological level is concerned Could go on if I went into specifics but I don't wanna spoil Would not recommend unless you enjoy getting exact figures of how fast a character can run in m/s, how much tnt they can survive and the like. You just know the author wrote this after getting asked "bUt cAn hE bEaT GOkU thOuGh?" Enough times to take it personally and write a character who has the power to birth gods and manipulate the laws of the universe in the 2nd tier of a potential 10

It’s a cool novel, not perfect, but it’s cool. If you wanna know more, ask me for details, or read the reviews below. But anyway, it’s cool, yeah.

So many info dumps. Most of the character interactions are cringe and the MC has a god complex.

So not only does the writing suck, the MC also sucks.

Bro what is wrong with the guys below me, the MC is quick to adapt and is honestly not that naive to the world, and the guys below me say he is too OP and the story is cut short???? come on bruh, readdddd, it is literally a universe scale story dumb ass me,

DEamn, people do not like this. To be honest it's okay. It isn't anything special but it is somewhat unique from what I have read. It is like a 3 maybe 3.5 if we are pushing it. I am giving it a five tho to cancel the 3 bad ones that are really unjustified.
Also with him getting overpowered really quickly, most people don't really like that and i get it, not your thing, you like actual progression in strength but also there are people who like that, mostly people who like just something to read not for story but just to read and turn our brains and enjoy.
That's all I really have to say, also no hate on anyone. Hope you guys have a good day, week, year, and lifetime. Happy National Day of Using Things with Torn Packaging. I just searched up what holiday is October 17th and that is what came up.

This is a very good story. Great background into who the characters are and its starting to show the direction they are heading in. The main character is getting more and more overpowered but its not some random powerups instead it something that blends with the story. Would definitely recommend. Dont listen to the bad review below those guys are fools.

BRUH!!! Fuck the guys below me who have given 2 stars rating. this is a really nice story in 1st person. So it is a lot different than most novels which is author's POV.