Civil Servant in Romance Fantasy

Certainly like how the Bulgarian Proverb goes "you can't have both the d*ck in the *ss and soul in the heaven"

Is that a real proverb lolol that's wild if it is

if you think this writing is normal then you are either too stupid to notice (no offense intended) or you read in 4D, because the writing is all over the place, the POVs switch randomly without notice, and most of the time you don't even know who is talking and to whom, and thoughts sound like dialogue while dialogue sounds like thoughts.

People can read horribly translated xuan huan novels without even flinching. At this level It should be easy to understand. About the POV switching sure I might be confuse when it first switch but I would instantly know who it was base on their tone and what they say since every character is unique. Its not that hard. Gimme a decently long dialogue from any chapter and I will try to guess who it is

Of course you can understand who is talking eventually if you try to understand hard enough, but that's the problem, it shouldn't be hard at all, you should never have to search to understand what's going on, you should be able to understand everything as you are reading because pausing every few Paragraphs to try to understand what's going on breaks the immersion, and that is a bad sign in a book.

Idk man it still doesn bother me in any way

Op probably meant that the writing or the translation doesn't flow well. I kinda agree with him too, the writing style is very repetitive(not talking about the plot, just grammar and vocabulary usage in general), it isn't the kind that would immerse you and makes you appreciate the book. Futhermore the POV itself is portrayed from first person, which makes the world around harder to illustrate without sufficient information and descriptions thrown towards us. Sometimes, we may have to go another mile and reference from different content from the internet to properly structure what kind of expressions the characters were making due to the writing style and the lack of information it provides.

Idk I kinda like the switch in pov

True, the thing that made me love this novel more IS the switch in POVs

ye they jus hatin, skill issue from their side

That I don't know brother because I only read last chapters of the novel from MTL 😶

Oh I understand. Thank you anyways

yes they have them but they are hardly mentioned